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Rewrote Godzilla. For the record, Godzilla is just about my favorite thing in the whole world. Review away. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 02:00, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	8.5	Another quality article, Guildy- I actually found this funny, and I think it's much better than the cruft that preceded it. While this could probably featured as it is, I think you could expand on your joke a lot more. For example, you could put Godzilla's date on death a little later, and talk about some of the comics and video games made about him? Overall, I think you've got a funny article, but you could also talk about a lot of other things, which i'll get into in the concept section.
Concept:	8	Wonderful concept- it has a lot of potential and can be made into a solid article. However, I think you basically stick to his films and earlier works. There have been a LOT of Godzilla movies and games, and while movies are obviously what you're best at, maybe you could expand on his character? Instead of having him die in 1995, have him live into the 2000s and credit him with natural disasters and such- like, say, Godzilla was the one who set the World Trade Center on fire with his breath, and then King Ghidorah set the South Tower on fire? These are just random ideas, but try not to strictly stick to the Godzilla continuity- make him seem depressed or in a rage throughout the 2000s, causing destruction. Just try to think outside the box- a straightfoward parody of Godzilla is great, but if you used your writing style with other things that fall outside of traditional Godzilla, it could really work wonders for your article. Also, you might want to consider getting more in-depth with his relationships for other monsters- what does he think of Rodan and Angirus (if I spelled that right)?
Prose and formatting:	8.5	No problems with your language or tone- you hit the third person encyclopedic narrative right on the mark, and you don't have any spelling errors that I could identifty. The main thing I want to address here is image placement. I don't know why you like having your images so big, but it can sort of have a negative effect- people are distracted by the huge image to the right (or left) of their text, so it makes it somewhat harder to read. You might consider scaling down your images a bit- it's just a suggestion, but I think your article would look more balanced if your images were smaller.
Images:	7	Decent. I wasn't exactly blown away, but they weren't really mediocre. The images aren't really what make the article, though they illustrate your subject well. If you want to go outside the Godzilla continuity like I suggested earlier, a photo of him hitting the Twin Towers would be pretty cool, but that's only if you decide to do it. No real complains about the images, I suppose.
Miscellaneous:	8.5	My overall grade of the article.
Final Score:	40.5	I think you've done a great job, Guildy- as you might have guessed by my earlier reviews, i'm hesitant to give people extremely enthusiastic scores. So I suppose my review could be summed up in this: excellent article and parody, but you could expand your scope of parody outside the Godzilla movies if you wanted to. If you're really feeling like using your imagination, you could make up a movie that he starred in and write about that. Godzilla is a huge subject, so you could parody a lot of things. If you plan on expanding this, just keep an open mind. Bottom Line: Great article, probably featurable, but could be added on grealty. Good luck! =)
Reviewer:	Saberwolf116 04:37, 28 June 2009 (UTC)