Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Euler's laws of motion
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Euler's laws of motion[edit source]
One of my concerns with this article is that the concept might get a little boring, or maybe I just don't know where to take it from here. Odysseus (talk) 04:47, 28 January 2020 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | Didn't make me laugh, but I did crack a smile because that picture that was obviously taken from Lincoln's assassination was done well. Developing the plot of the film would be much advised. Adding silly shit would help, but make it not over-the-top like the fucking battleship. |
| Concept: | 8 | Quite a good concept in theory. This has a lot of potential to start something like a series of films about scientists fighting over things. I want to see more ideas from this concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6.9 | It was formatted well. The style is quite good; though I feel like the last section needs something on it. |
| Images: | 10 | Seriously, the images in this one save this article. Both the film poster and the "assassination" attempt images made me smile. |
| Miscellaneous: | -1.311 | This one is to drop this one's score because as of 28 Feb 2020, S&P has dropped 13% in a week; actually, this one is the way it is because I feel like this article needs some work on it. It has the potential to be a featured article. |
| Final Score: | 27.589 | Just add more content to the story, please. |
| Reviewer: | Risviltsov (talk) 17:44, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |