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Biology[edit source]
An Unwehr rewrite. Review away. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 17:18, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
- Don't worry Professor, I'll handle this article! 18:16 Aug 19, 2009 18:16, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | It was a bit of a one-joke topic. Although it was quite a witty play on words, I feel like the entire article could've just been condensed down to a one-liner. |
| Concept: | 8 | Like I said before, this was a very clever idea. No improvement needed here. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Well-written overall. Not many grammar or spelling errors, and the article formatting wasn't at all hard on the eyes. |
| Images: | 6 | Although there weren't many, the images you did use were both humorous and relevant to the text. Could use more images, though. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | lulz. |
| Final Score: | 34.5 | Just work on having more than one continuous joke, and add more images. |
| Reviewer: | 18:33 Aug 19, 2009 18:33, 19 August 2009 (UTC) | |