Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ancient Aliens (again)
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Ancient Aliens [edit source]
Sir Peasewhizz asked me to do this one. --
05:03, 9 November 2014 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | There were a lot of great moments in this. I really liked lines like “If aliens came to Earth and said, 'Whoa! we've never been here before,' well yes, that might be a disproof.” And stuff like mentioning Mike Wazowski as one of the monsters.Really funny stuff. The reference to AAAAAAAA! is kind of unnecessary and not very original so I would cut that. Also, I didn’t love the ending. The whole thing was building up this energy and was really funny and then end with the cliché bloodstain, which I wasn’t thrilled with. Maybe you could tweak that a little. I would also move the “Aliens made this poem” down a little more. It comes in a bit too soon for the joke to really land. Also, I would shift the “Aliens styled my hair” section down more since it’s more like absurdist humor, which tends to work better if you build up to it. I definitely laughed a lot though. The stuff in the middle is very strong. |
| Concept: | 9 | This is probably the best way to handle such a ridiculous show. By taking the absurdity of what “Ancient Aliens” presents and upping it a notch, it shows exactly how crazy these ideas are. It just works really well. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I like the formatting and the big “ALIENS.” I can’t seem to find any huge grammar or spelling issues, altough the multiple ellipsis (… … …) look kind of strange. Also, why does the Wikipedia box appear twice? |
| Images: | 7 | The pictures are pretty good. Nothing super hilarious but they work well with the tone of the article and everything. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Average of scores. |
| Final Score: | 40 | I laughed, so it’s definitely funny. I think if you just fix up that last section, it’ll be great and definitely feature-worthy. :) |
| Reviewer: | 05:03, 9 November 2014 (UTC)
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