Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A crush on a girl who is not single

Humour:	6.5	Somewhat funny. Brings more feels than funnies (I had ACOAGWINS once, it was awful). In that respect most people will relate and laugh. Would be good if you made a different section for Causes rather than stuff it with the Introduction.
Concept:	8.5	I liek. The presentation is nice and coherent, with comprehensible analogies (alcohol as medicine and the like).
Prose and formatting:	9	Nice. No complaints.
Images:	4	Huh? What images? Add a few relevant ones. And get that Bieber picture out of there you!
Miscellaneous:	7	To fix: Causes as a different section if you will. Images. Scatter a few jokes with the links, like this. This isn't a problem per se but the See Also list is a bit populated.
Final Score:	35	Improvable. Doesn't need a lot of work, just a general brushup and images. Also, you could add some randomness, like you have right here: ...it has also been recorded that these records of carving names into arms also consist of heartbreak haikus... So maybe add a few more of these. Have fun.
Reviewer:	Tumb13weed (talk) 20:45, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

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