Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A-Rod's 0-for-4
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A-Rod's 0-for-4[edit source]
Well, it's my 4th effort and I think it's quite good. How about you? Fist of Judgement 01:54, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
A-Rod's 0-for-4 is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
Now that the que is empty, we jump all over new pee review requests. ...like starving animals • <-> Mar 27 (09:06)
- I STRONGLY suggest that you press that tab at the top of A-Rod's 0-for-4 that says "move" and move it to simply A-Rod so people can just type in A-Rod and go to your article. • <-> Mar 27 (09:24)
Humour: | 5.7 | Oh, baseball? I don't know much about baseball except that a ball is included during play. Well, you have to take your readers as they come, I suppose (in other words, you can't choose your readers). Don't be surprised if I don't get it, though... and don't be mad at me! Anyway, avg of all sections...
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Concept: | 6 | Uncyc needs a page about A-Rod, and not just Alex Rodriguez. However, it probably is too esoteric for most of us. |
Prose and formatting: | 10 | Very impressive. It was like reading an actual article about that one guy striking out 4 times. |
Images: | 7 | Oh, I don't know. I hate this section of the review! I liked having the pictures there, but they weren't funny for me, a person who knows diddly about baseball. |
Miscellaneous: | 7.2 | avg'd via {{Pee|5.7|6|10|7}}
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Final Score: | 35.9 | Oh, I know what you were hoping for: a 49/50 at least? I have felt that way on many of my articles. I suggest moving on to your next project, as this one is in article limbo: never going to be deleted (because the writing itself is really good), but never going to be featured (because it doesn't appeal to enough people). Is there any way to make references to things normal people watch? Ask for help from baseball fans you know... how would you explain this 0-4 thing to laymen so that it's funny? The only thing I can suggest for you right now is going WAY over the top in your love of A-Rod until the very end. I hope I helped, Fist! Keep on trucking, okay? Your writing style is easy and flowing: keep writing. |
Reviewer: | • <-> Mar 27 (09:50) |