UnScripts talk:An interview with an Egyptian taxi driver

So[edit source]

I'm still waiting to see what's Attacky means exactly. From my side - when you ask a collab, you can expect a different type of humor than yours right? As we are dealing with a stereotypical interview, I exaggerated what Westerns think of Middle Eastern countries and took it to the extreme. I think that some of the changes you made, killed several of the punch lines I was trying to bring in. They also destroyed quite spectacularly the audio that is nearly complete. ~ 07:44, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

oh, sorry.. Ok, add back your punch lines. I wanted the script to be as authentic as possible, not stereotypical... But I think your stereotypical-ish approach is better. Now, if you are going to add the ten children thing, add it to the I got marry line, make it I got mary.. I have Ahmad, Samira, Alaa, Wafaa, Ibrahim, Sobhi, Mahmood, Soaad, Hani and little Hussein.. And I drive taxi Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

09:05 May 27 '09

That one is not really that essential if you don't think it adds anything. I just think that the whole line on the Egyptian family picture was funny - with the driver trying to tell how he is miserable and has no food, when in fact he's doing rather well. I get your drift about the authenticity part, but I think only you, me and a couple more will get it that way...~

09:38, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

yeah, I agree.. Add your stuff back, and remember, his English is shitty, his grammar and structure are shittier.. Sn, try to make his english as basic and broken as possible Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

09:56 May 27 '09

That works well since my English is like a baklawa left in the sun for too long! ~

09:57, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

lol, that one was really good! Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

10:00 May 27 '09

Pee Review[edit source]

I think it's ready to be put on another pee review, unless you want to put any additional parts. ~ 15:29, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

if you can get UU to do it this time, yes Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

15:37 May 27 '09

VFH[edit source]

Im putting it on VFH per what UU said in the review Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool 08:33 May 31 '09

Added location[edit source]

I have added 'in Cairo' as though you say an 'Egyptian' sunny day - I don't think you gave a city location. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 09:07, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

One other minor point. How does he know she is a reporter ? Is the woman walking around with a notebook or a camera crew ? --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 09:10, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Your own edit Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool is better. That makes more sense. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 11:14, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

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11:27 June 2 '09

Phwoar[edit source]

That reporter is fucking hot! —The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 11:59, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Hey, dude! I havent seen you since you reviewed my first shitty article. How are you now? :) Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

12:03 June 4 '09

Travelling the world currently while having to work tonnes, how about yourself? --—The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 08:21, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

doing my medical school's finals while having to work megatonnes. Life's hard these days. :) Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

09:15 June 5 '09

Medical school? I thought you were in collage. --Docile hippopotamus 09:59, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

Medical school means college, I guess. Faculty of Medicine Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool

10:11 June 5 '09

Isn't med school fun, here though we just go to Uni and do it, much quicker than med school :) --—The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 08:19, 8 June 2009 (UTC)