Talk:Pet Jesus

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Think I'm done[edit source]

Hi, fellas! This is my first entry and I'm not a native speaker, so I welcome everyone who wants to improve the language quality of this article, specially in the middle english part.NeedABrain 00:26, 7 August 2006 (UTC)

Pee Review[edit source]

This is an old one, but someone removed it from The Host of Minor Jesii template. Is it that bad? NeedABrain 01:37, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

  • Bringing it up. This is my very first article and it received the 'Jesus approved' template so I guess it is a good one. Dare I to VFH? I also want a special favour from some photoshopist: to turn a Sea Monkey image into a "Jesus Sea Monkey" image, so we can drop Dr. Zoidberg from the opening. herr doktor needsAbolt Rocket.gif [scream!] 15:27, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
  • That's actually quite good (you can imagine my surprise, I'm sure...) The "instructions" section is brilliant- I'd be a little sceptical about its chances on VFH, if only because everyone is completely sick of Jesus articles. If I'm being really picky, I should point out that the term "immaculate conception" actually refers to the birth of the madonna rather than Jesus himself, whose birth is simply called the virgin birth (look out, religious studies nerd coming through) but yeah, against all odds, good article. --Sir Jam 13:26, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
Yeah, you are right about the I.C. But immaculate conception is surely a cooler expression than virgin birth. :D herr doktor needsAbolt Rocket.gif [scream!] 23:42, 16 November 2006 (UTC)
  • No, this really is a good article--the beginning could use more jokes, but the rest was gold. I especially liked the Nebraska Trial part. If this was on VFH I'd vote for it, but I have to agree with Jam, everyone's pretty much tired of Jesus. But who knows, I say go for it. --Señor DiZtheGreat Honor me! CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 14:35, 19 November 2006 (UTC)

Well, I may conclude that I did a fine job, despite the Jesus spawning concerns. But I would never to VFH my own article - it's against my code of honor. Will be a SIR one day - just have to find that damn sword in the rock. :D -- herr doktor needsAbolt Rocket.gif [scream!]