Talk:One Out of Ten Doctors
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This isn't done yet, I'm just sorta stuck and need feedback/ideas for expansion. -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 00:42, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 6 | Clever, but the part about his early life should be cut back and rewritten based on one or two of the ideas in that section, so the reader gets a quick laugh and move on to the rest of it. |
Concept: | 9 | I like this idea a lot. I admit that I had to think about it a bit, but when it finally hit me, I wasn't bruised as badly as you might expect from being hit with an abstract concept. |
Prose and formatting: | 9 | Basically flawless in this department, but it's short. A snob would probably find something specific to pick on, but I'm not one of those. Lots of blue links, which is a delightful thing. |
Images: | 5 | This will need to be worked on, although this concept doesn't lend itself to pictures. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | n/a |
Final Score: | 39 | I would recommend putting in more quack-medicine references. Look around badscience.net for more ideas. Also, might I suggest The Hypochondriac's Pocket Guide to Horrible Diseases You Probably Already Have for more potential ideas? |
Reviewer: | 02:07, 7 February 2007 (UTC) |
Maybe someone should put in something to the effect of "9 out of 10 doctors agree that 1 out of 10 doctors is an idiot."
- Now that would be funny.
Done[edit source]
Another redlink article fixed --Fuck Signatures, I Give Up! 20:01, August 29, 2012 (UTC)