Talk:MrBeast

Pee Review

Humour:	1	Needs more content, when writing about a notable internet person or celebrity, sometimes the more wacky shit you put in the article can help, only when the truth is funnier than ANYTHING you can make up should you be 100% truthful. Uncyclopedia is a parody wiki, go nuts.
Concept:	6	It's an article on a famous internet funnyman, which is pretty hit or miss most of the time. Their internet career is rather uninteresting to be the subject of comedic effect, but sometimes their less than perfect sides can be a little funny. If all else fail, make shit up, but mix it with enough of the truth to make it more than complete nonsense. Make a remark about related to team trees or how much money he inexplicably has (i.e:maybe something like, "MrBeast is a nomadic huntsman hailing from the deep woods of Kansas, and CEO of Team Trees, created in an effort to expand his sphere of influence and force all to adopt his tree-skulking life style.") Really it depends on what exactly you do with the concept.
Prose and formatting:	7	Not much to comment about the prose. Grammar is alright, it's written in a nice, encyclopedic format. The only glaring issue I see is that the writing style isn't anything special, there's not much content to work with or poke fun at, it sorta feels bland and nothing really stands out, it feels like a normal Wikipedia article with some offhanded comments on subbots.
Images:	0	No images; images can help with the comedy and timing of some areas of your article, and there's no need to fret over having no photochoping skills. Sometimes a witty caption under a normal image can turn normalcy into hilarity.
Miscellaneous:	3.5	Needs a lot more content to carry more comedic weight
Final Score:	17.5	Like I said, articles on real people are very hit or miss, with hard hits and bad misses, absurdity and insanity can always be a very good help. If you're starved for ideas on what exactly to put in the article, sometimes taking one joke and sticking with it helps, even if that one thing is something as stupid as arctic char. If you haven't already read HTBFANJS and UN:BEST they can be absolute godsends in lieu of comedic guidance and inspiration. Other than that, good luck, take it easy and happy trails.
Reviewer:	---товарищ Rooomy of the Soviet Union (Yell at me woo) 15:18, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

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