Talk:Jim Morrison
very uncool
your a sick fuck not very good either
Paschal Murphy
True Jim Fan
haha..even though i love jim morrison this did in fact make me laugh out loud and scare my family.
Huh! I'm a fan of Morrison's music, and didn't laugh at one line in this. I'm honestly surprised that this made you "laugh out loud". The funniest line in the bunch is the trivia section line about him still being alive, and *that* wasn't real funny. Morrison's life was loaded with good material; the Indian stuff, dreary lyrics, etc, but it sure wasn't used in a comedic way here.
dummy fool
yeah, unfunny perv
noot cool
If you don't find it funny, re-write it.. wanker
This article really needs some TLC... But a good Jim Morrison article would really be spiffy.--
Pee Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 10 | The article puts across its comic ideas neatly and very smoothly. Jim Morrison was no doubt a pain in the ass but there is a funny pain in the ass. Did you know he killed himself in Paris after watching too much kiddie orientated TV? Or the haunting quality of Morrison's limericks. Yes limericks, not lyrics. |
| Concept: | 9 | Covers Jim Morrison's career from conception to deception. A few misses (no Lizard King? Perhaps a few more incidents could have been added (Morrison's willy waving at an audience in Florida). There is also no list of some of Morrison's works. A few there could have been added for extra laughs. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Very few typos. Quality work in that department. Photos are good and funny in themselves. |
| Images: | 9 | Photos are good and funny in themselves. Perhaps a couple of more could be used but that wouldn't effect the overall look |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Overall this is very creditable and funny article. Might appear long and perhaps some minor tweaks to tighten it up but this has an excellent chance of becoming a feature. |
| Final Score: | 48 | Jim Morrison kept his life's pedal on the metal until he died. This article is an excellent introduction to a colourful life. |
| Reviewer: | -- RomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 16:51, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
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