Talk:Jerry Jackson
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Originally from User:Gnu32/Jerry_Jackson. Has potential, good emulation of Jerry Jackson, just needs more of his humor. --87.201.142.178 18:21, 27 December 2006 (UTC)
- Updated Pee Review formatting. This pee is getting pretty stale. --87.201.142.178 07:11, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | This will be funny only to a select audience. |
| Concept: | 7 | A page written in the style of the person it satirizes. Jackson/Firth is a good subject for this treatment. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Someone with l33t as a first language should check this. Conventional prose analysis is not relevant. |
| Images: | 4 | Surely we can find more images for an article on intarweb flash comixx than the copyright symbol? |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Needs development: see endnotes. |
| Final Score: | 31 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 21:06, 6 January 2007 (UTC) | |
OK, as a licensed Old Ignorant Fudgewit I had to look up Janet Jackson's Tit mpeg Jerry Jackson before I got the joke. ("Jerry Jackson" is actually David Firth, creator of Salad Fingers and other Perversions of the Internet.)
The main thing here is, if a reader has already looked at fat-pie.com/jerryjackson then he will get a giggle out of the parody. If he has not, he will most likely say "What is all this dam' childish chat-speeks do on my computer screen? I am going busta head on this fella dat writted this just so soon as I get this alligator to leggo my foot." Or words to that effect.
My main advice would be to find a way to give the clueless reader a clue. Format the page to look a little more like the factional Jerry Jackson's page. Link to the Jackson page, maybe. Add some images that look like the ones on the Jerry Jackson site, and maybe in the caption say "As not seen on http://www.fat-pie.com/jerryjackson.htm!!1!! LOLZ!".
Do whatever you can to make this parody-of-a-parody accessible to a wider audience. That's some evil advice from an evil, evil man. ----OEJ 21:55, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
I just added an image. That way the common folk will know what Jerry Jackson looks like. -- 07:38, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
Done a bit, with a large jerry-esque title and custom pee review template. Also put in a "content theft" warning with a subtle link to Jerry's site, but perhaps a little too subtle. I'll try a different approach and find some good imagery tomorrow. Cheers for all this though. Oh, and i'm done hiding in this dreadful outfit. --Gnu32 17:45, 7 January 2007 (UTC)