HowTo talk:Get Expelled from School

Regarding The "Reversion"

Seeing as how Shabidoo wasn't exactly pleased with my edit to the article, I feel like the least I could do would be to explain myself. Shabidoo, while I appreciate you and Brogo's contributions to the article, I felt the humor was going in a much different direction and being a little too random. The article had a lot of one-off interjections that didn't fit in very much with the rest of the article as well, like the unexplained change to the "Cum-Receptacle" insult and the overfocusing on genatalia. I do think some of the contributions were good and funny, such as the masturbation section and the Fire Alarm. WohMi Speaketh Here! 16:29, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Look ... I try. --Brogo13 (talk) 18:03, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Thank you WohMi. I am fine with being reverted, but in general, something to consider, when an established user makes substantial contributions over several days, consider explaining so on their talk page or the articles talk page instead of a "ehhh...I'm not pleased with..." edit summary mass removing a lot of work without any explanation. My edits were an attempt to actually reduce the amount of disparate writing elements and styles and tie them together with a common narrative style throughout. That may not have been successful, which is fine, since you took the riegns of this before I did, I leave it all to you. Having said that, I would recommend putting more work into it, because as it stands, to me it is full of lots of randomness, a few fairly wonky lines and a bit of chaos (almost all of this legacies of Lolipop's immature writing style). I have put significant work in trying to get a collab with Lollipop featured (for example Stupid cats), which isnt easy as I've been working on that off and on for about 10 years never quite able to get it somewhere. So yeah, I'd very much like to see something he has worked on featured...but I would definitely not vote on Howtoget expelled as it is. Do consider trying to unify it more. It is almost there and if you can pull it off, then you'll maybe even have a top 10 of 2022. ShabiDOO 21:20, 17 April 2022 (UTC)