User talk:Ketchup Boss/Yolanda Salvidar
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Users,I know that suicide is not funny and that the band Quedtion Mark and The Mysterians are awesome. I do not want to hurt anybody's feelings in any why at all. This article was made to make fun of Yolanda Salvidar,the bastard who murdered Selena Perez back in 1995.--Ketchup Boss (talk) 04:05, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Ok - but again, I see you stating your opinions on this and what appear to be facts, and there is nothing funny or clever about it. The feeling I get reading this is that you're really angry about it. Humour is essentially surprising the reader; think of how you could surprise the reader, make sense but be kind of absurd about it. Try saying things that are obviously not true - for example, say that Yolanda was really healthy due to the junk food or that there was a good reason for murdering Selena Perez (but give a silly or stupid reason). Those aren't great examples but they'd be a step in the right direction. – Llwy-ar-lawr (talk • contribs • logs) 04:13, 22 Apr 2014
- Also, I have no idea who Honey Boo Boo is. This could just be me, or it could be that you should try to explain that better. – Llwy-ar-lawr (talk • contribs • logs) 01:46, 23 Apr 2014
- Honey Boo Boo is a child star in a reality series on American cable TV (I think TLC channel but could be wrong). Definitely needs an explanation there for those who don't watch American cable television or who don't subscribe to that channel. -- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 05:24, 2 May 2014 (UTC)