Uncyclopedia:VFH/UnNews:Massacre at Brookfield Zoo (2nd nomination)

Article: UnNews:Massacre at Brookfield Zoo	Score: -1 human beings viciously ripped to shreds
Nominated by:	84.194.239.240 20:30, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
For: 1	Self For. Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 23:48, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Against: 2	against. a solid unnews, but not front-page material. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 21:03, 4 September 2008 (UTC) Against. Not yet quality writing, in my opinion. I added some endnotes on this point to GerryCheever's pee review of this article. ----OEJ 02:33, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments	Please forgive Sockpuppet of an unregistered user for his previous mistakes, he won't do it again. 84.194.239.240 20:30, 2 September 2008 (UTC) Abstained: Since it's a sequel to my own article, I can't bring myself to vote against. As a small tip, though, Sockpuppet, cut out a little bit of the swearing; it got a little bit repetitive (check your uses of the word 'shit') and that doesn't read well. Nice start, though. --Mr. Monkey Pant-hoot here. 21:11, 2 September 2008 (UTC) I made some changes, hopefully for the better. Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 23:22, 2 September 2008 (UTC) Additionally, this article has been on Peer Review for a week, in case no one checked. Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 23:22, 2 September 2008 (UTC) So it has... I do apologize. Mr N 23:37, Sep 2 Following Gerrycheevers' Pee Review, I made some additional changes. Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 22:39, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

VFH

The nomination was not successful. Because I'm suspicious. Sockpuppet of an unregistered user

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