Uncyclopedia:VFH/Tombstone

Article: Tombstone	Score: 5 votes carved in stone
Nominated by:	Aleister in Chains
For: 9	Self-nom and For. My entry in the Happymonkey contest, carved and shaped with a very good review by Black Flamingo (he peed on a Tombstone, hee hee) and contest judging comments by HELPME and HappyTimes. The one in-joke is written so it can stand alone outside of the site. Aleister 20:29 10 8 Ugh, a Mr. Winkler joke Good other than that though. »» Back ² Tha Hood»» 21:27,10August,2010 For. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 00:12, 11 August 2010 For. Funny bony 14:00, Aug 11 14:00, August 11, 2010 (UTC) For. I really like this Al, it's much better following your revisions. I think I agree with everyone else on the Winkler thing, but it's such a minor detraction that you barely notice. --Black Flamingo 19:21, August 11, 2010 (UTC) Yes This is quite funny, Al strikes again. -- S f 1 3 21:07 EST 11 Aug, 2010 I think the Mr Winkler joke should stay as a way of Uncyc officially burying it, with tombstone and all. Sir Mac Mania GUN—[02:54 12 Aug 2010] For. You massive whore. But yes, it's good. —TWAT WHORE Mr. Antonio Yettie (talk) [21:00 16 August 2010] For. (Voting for this on principle as I haven't seen the post-contest version yet; but have seen many edits in my watch log.) Also this: Keep the Winkler pic, it's good enough in this context & caption to stand on it's own. ~ Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* (talk) (stalk) Π ~ ~ 18 Aug 2010 ~ 06:08 (UTC)
Against: 4	Against. It's ok but I don't see it as a feature. Sorry. *RomArtusImperator ® (Orate) 06:28, August 11, 2010 (UTC) Against. A little low on luls for myself, personally. Sowee. --Matfen 18:18, August 13, 2010 (UTC) Against. Dr. Fenwick 01:52, August 17, 2010 (UTC) Against**. Starts off pretty promisingly (the last introductory paragraph is great) but quickly slumps the rest of the way through. Also, the writing style is (for lack of a better word) schizophrenic at times. TKFU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U UU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U CK 04:08, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Comments	I'm trying to get a photo from a huffed page to replace the Winkler tombstone, unless people don't mind it. I didn't think it was that much of a problem because we have a scarcity of tombstone pics on the site and Winkler's is one of the only good ones. Aleister 00:08 10 8 Re TKF: As I'm a founding member of thev "Schizo's Writing Workshop" at Iowa State University, can you please give a couple of examples, he who has never voted for one of my pages? Aleister 12:29 18 8 In the bible, if you can believe that scandal sheet, a couple of angels lugged the rock out of Jesus's way so he could walk away from his tomb. Quite a trick, show us another. That passage comes to mind, as well as the Princess Diana footnote (which was mentioned in your Pee Review). A little variation is nice but your tone is just here and there and all over the place. As for being "he who has never voted for one of my pages," these little distracting flourishes tend to be staples of most of the articles you write that pass by here. I'm not particularly a fan, sorry (also: bolded captions).-- TKFU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U UU U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U U CK 09:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)