User talk:Lctmu

User:Lctmu/UnNews:Israel developed the virus 'Facebook' to undermine Iranian productivity

Thanks for picking a username--we can talk here. Your other contribution of the day I concluded was incomplete and abandoned, and sent it to be deleted. If this is incorrect, please let me know. 18:06 Strike that; I'll just move it to your userspace, under the name shown above. When you make it more complete, you can move it back to UnNews. By the way, be sure to read the UnNews Style Guide and even the note from the Chief. Spıke ¬ 18:12 18-Jan-11

I've given it a quick once-over, sorted out the spelling and made a few adjustments to the grammar. It's got promise - so I hope you'll develop it a bit more. Don't hesitate to ask if you need any assistance. :-) Rabbi Techno kvetch Contribs FOXES 18:30, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

I further shortened the headline, as shown above. Spıke ¬ 18:37 18-Jan-11

A problem with this one is that we usually invent quotes to tell a story of how the news was uncovered or how famous people are reacting to it. In this piece, you just go, Oh--it was in a WikiLeaks dump. That's kind of cheating. At any rate, the article has one good joke, but see what other things you can do with it, what other directions you can pull it in. Spıke ¬ 18:47 18-Jan-11

UnNews:Morgan Freeman to play Bilbo Baggins in "The Hobbit"

This one interested NickJonesUSA and you are now in UnNews:UnNewsAudio#Other writers whose stuff got broadcast--Add your national flag, if you care. Spıke ¬ 13:13 21-Jan-11

PS--In case you are not adept at using your "watchlist" to detect changes to things, I have raised additional concerns about this article on its talk page. UnNews being a "drive-by" medium and your article having been finished, narrated, and put to bed, you may or may not want to do anything about them. Spıke ¬ 01:18 23-Jan-11