User talk:JelloMold/Zach Braff

This is pretty good; the concept is a funny one and the intro had me chuckling away. I would say you need to stick to the concept as much as you can though. For instance, in the bit about Scrubs you mention how it never showed a drop of blood etc. -but if it was a hard-hitting drama surely it wouldn't be so decorous? Try to keep up the "hard-hitting" thing all the way through. Overall, it's probably the best thing you've written for the site so far. --Black Flamingo 20:10, June 14, 2011 (UTC)