User talk:IFYMB!/UnScripts:Snowden's Phone Calls
So, what do you think will be the order of the sections? "Act 1: Mr Snowden and Mr N. (his friend)"; "Act 2: Mr Snowden and Mrs N. (his mother)" and finally "Act 3: Mr. and Mrs. Z. and Mr. Snowden". Do you think it is good or do you have another suggestion? Anton (talk) 20:36, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I was thinking more along the lines of Act 1: Snowden taps call - Chineese Minister and DVD store, Act 2: Snowden gets tapped - Snowden his mother, and Act 3: Snowden gets tapped - Snowden and Assange. I think being more specific helps... IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 21:05 12 July 2013
- Ok. But we don't have to reveal the concept. We can jut make the titles short like "Act 1: Chinese Minister, DVD store and Snowden", etc. Anton (talk) 07:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- True, the concept doesn't need to be revealed, but I think it might be too vague if we do it how you're suggesting. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 08:23 13 July 2013
- Well, ok. So should it be like you said? Anton (talk) 09:21, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I just think we need to make it clear who is doing the tapping. I cannot think of a way to make it clear unless we say so in the Act Title. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 09:28 13 July 2013
- But won't it be clear in the text? But that's fine and the titles can be left like that. Anton (talk) 09:44, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, great. We can move on now. Which Act would you like to write? IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 09:54 13 July 2013
- I don't mind. That depends on whether you have any particular ideas and jokes that you would like to have in some act. If you do, you can take this act. Anton (talk) 12:32, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I think i'll take the Snowden-Assange call. The Chinesse minister and the DVD store call is just an idea so you can change it if you wish. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 12:40 13 July 2013
- Ok. So we can begin, I think. Anton (talk) 13:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm still confused. Which one are you doing? IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 16:23 13 July 2013
- As you said, you are doing the Julian Assange one and I will take the DVD store or something. Anton (talk) 16:35, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oh, wait, I think we will do this one together, as this is where Snowden will tap a call amd so I will take the one with his mother. Anton (talk) 16:36, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, thanks for clearing that up. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 16:47 13 July 2013
- I'm still confused. Which one are you doing? IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 16:23 13 July 2013
- Ok. So we can begin, I think. Anton (talk) 13:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I think i'll take the Snowden-Assange call. The Chinesse minister and the DVD store call is just an idea so you can change it if you wish. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 12:40 13 July 2013
- I don't mind. That depends on whether you have any particular ideas and jokes that you would like to have in some act. If you do, you can take this act. Anton (talk) 12:32, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, great. We can move on now. Which Act would you like to write? IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 09:54 13 July 2013
- But won't it be clear in the text? But that's fine and the titles can be left like that. Anton (talk) 09:44, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I just think we need to make it clear who is doing the tapping. I cannot think of a way to make it clear unless we say so in the Act Title. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 09:28 13 July 2013
- Well, ok. So should it be like you said? Anton (talk) 09:21, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- True, the concept doesn't need to be revealed, but I think it might be too vague if we do it how you're suggesting. IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 08:23 13 July 2013
- Ok. But we don't have to reveal the concept. We can jut make the titles short like "Act 1: Chinese Minister, DVD store and Snowden", etc. Anton (talk) 07:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Wanted to ask: won't it be cooler if the person who taps Snowden's calls will be the same in the first and in the second act? If yes, than we should invent his name. Anton (talk) 11:59, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, good point. We need a name... any suggestions? IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 23:19 16 July 2013
I finally set up to work on this and I think that it would be cool if the tapper was an emigrant from Britain, for instance, who could not find any job except for the one in the CIA. Anton (talk) 12:19, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
The second act[edit source]
I finished the second act about Snowden and his mother. In this part, Brown taps the call (but some clatifications are needed about him later on, such as the ones I mentioned above). Snowden says that he goes to Cuba and his mother predicts his unexpected stop at Moscow. So Snowden can call Assange in Russia (or no, if you do not like the idea).
If you have any suggestions, it would be really cool, as I do not think that the act is as funny asnit ought to be. By the way, I am also leaving Uncyclopedia and will probaly return at the beginning of September. Anton (talk) 18:37, 21 August 2013 (UTC)