User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2015/MyOwnBadSelf Scores and comments

Happy Monkey Competition 2015

Results and scores for MyOwnBadSelf

Article: Furniture

From Sarah

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
8/10	7/10	7/10	22/30

My favourite was the 'Reception' part. I also liked 'a woman named Sara': very random and total unnecessary information. Making the length the reason why the film is bad is creative and funny. Too bad indeed it didn't make it to a full article, wouldve liked to read it!

From GrammarFegelein

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
7/10	6/10	9/10	22/30

The idea of evil furniture terrorizing houses and wanting to take over the world is very creative and original with characters played by random people from the streets and the furniture by actual furniture. I had a few giggles reading this but nothing LOL funny which is why I've given you a 6 in humor. It's a shame you've withdrawn Badself because if you completed this, it would be a lot better than it is now.

From Shabidoo

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
5/10	8/10	5/10	18/30

For humour I give you high marks. It was short but what I read made me laugh. Stating mundane information which states undesireable qualities as though they are good or as though that is the way it should be...is always funny...but not so easy to get right. Little details like the furniture being played by the furniture, many characters all being played by one actor and the bad reception mainly due to the length all made me laugh. If you had completed the article I would have given you high marks for creativity and originality...(and it certainly is very original and creative).

From THS

Score
6/10

Very interesting concept with a lot of potential for humor. I think, if you expanded this into a full article, including pictures, more details and everything, it would have been very funny and maybe even feature-worthy. Sadly, as it is it's ultimately too short for me to give a high score. ~[ths] UotM 06:01, 08/05/2015

Grand Total

68/100