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Zombie Reagan

So I stole got creative input from an Onion piece that was run a few days ago about the Republicans reviving Ronald reagan as a zombie and I ran with it. Tell me what you guys think. Skinfan13 19:14, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	6	Stolen, highly surrealistic and sensless, but quite funny overall. However the part from start to the middle is rather boring. I know it's hard to write something funny about reviving a corpse but you shoul reconsider shortening the intro or merging intro and first section into one. Second part of first section after the intro is totally needless as it just repeats the info written in the intro. But following parts were funny but not SOOOOO FUNNNY ;p.
Concept:	4	Uhm... You stole that from the Onion. What d'ya expected?
Prose and formatting:	8	Typical news' prose. Decent. Maybe may be better but it would need some ass-kicking outbursts of tabloid-like language etc.
Images:	5	One very good image with decent caption. Add something more maybe? Some image of unburied grave, broken tombstone or maybe some screenshot of Frankenstein the movie from mad scientist's lab? Be creative.
Miscellaneous:	5.8	Average of those above. But I assume this article may be better, even if shorter. Don't kill the joke, mon!
Final Score:	28.8	Well... I think it wouldn't make the VFH but maybe quasi-feature? Who the hell knows? Who the hell cares?
Reviewer:	Sir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj • KUN 17:04, December 24, 2009 (UTC), the fucking Polack