Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Walter The Dog

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Walter The Dog[edit]

Hello again, i'm resubmitting this article again since the older criticism no longer seems that helpful to me anymore, maybe except for the photoshop part, but the humor comes from the images being completely normal.

So anyway I hope you guys try to shine my article in the worst light so I can give it a wrench. —G.L.S. talk & stuff 21:16, 8 December 2020 (UTC)

Humour: 3.5 I'm not the biggest fan of the whole "omnipresent being" thing, it's just kind of boring and kind of feels like a "Mary-Sue" article. I understand it's probably done in jest, but consider adding some "funnies" in there.
Concept: 8.5 Normally I'd rate the "New-Age" memes as poor concept due to the nonsensical nature of most modern-day memes, but you done made a whole "cinematic" universe out of a silly looking bull terrier. Nice work!
Prose and formatting: 9.75 The formatting on this article is fantastic. The warning at the top of the page, the "message" at the bottom of the page, everything is good. My only, very-very small problem with it is that the info-page for Walter on the right is a bit too wide. Try looking at an article like George W. Bush for how to size an infobox. Also, there's very small grammatical errors, which I will go over and fix after this.
Images: 8 Walter. Bonus points for the picture of "Walter" smiling. That's adorable, and I like it a lot.
Miscellaneous: 5 Just some of a reiteration, the "Godlike Powerful" trait can be funny, but if used correctly. Otherwise it comes off as sort of unfunny, and Mary-Sue-ish.
Final Score: 34.75 All hail Walter, and Salutations from Universe-3151.
Reviewer: -WohMi, the best damn duelist on this website (talk) 18:14, 31 January 2021 (UTC)

The problem here is that I simply can't see images, otherwise, thank you alot for this. I've been needing something to do while trying to get my unblock request accepted :) —G.L.S. talk & stuff 12:39, 1 February 2021 (UTC)