Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/V for Vendetta
V for Vendetta[edit source]
I feel like I'm missing something. Would like a pointer or two. Tumb13weed 
21:51, 24 November 2013 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | I thought it was 2006? ... OK... I have not seen the film, but I'm aware of what the V means in popular culture, so maybe I get some of this, but obviously as I have not seen the film this may be clever in ways which I don't understand. ...
...I was bored until I got to "Like many gamer n00bs, V became pretty epic when he grew up and hit the streets. He marched down the roads, wearing a Guy Fawkes mask and that old Megadeth t-shirt, listening to Tchaikovsky's 1812 Overture and A Tout Le Monde by Megadeth on his iPod. He carried with him a precious, coveted set of uber-cool knives. " which was entertaining. Generally it's all just a bit flat. I suggest that you make it a bit more silly! Take the edge of it a bit and have the author self mocking a little even. More suggestions about this below... |
| Concept: | 6.5 | OK, Really you have just straight talked about the film right? Hmm... Kinda boring maybe. Although it's OK as is I think you need a new concept to spice it up.. Do you understand what the V means in popular culture? What other people using the 'V' slogan for what things in real life? Perhaps you could change your article so that instead of talking about the actual actors and actress you could pretend that say... However you think was actually playing the parts in the film or perhaps directing or producing the whole thing. People associated with 'V' in real life I mean. You need to blend the truth of the real world in with the truth about what happened with the film. If you can do it in such a way that many people can't tell what's real and not then you are on a winner...
Do you get where I'm going with this? I don't know the film, but I know V and can help you improve this if you like... |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | No real problems other than what I always say which is read it through to yourself out loud a few times. I recommend you change the article fundamentally first though. You need a new concept... |
| Images: | 8 | Lots of nice images, but the captions are not getting giggles. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | More is often not better. You could cut out a lot of this article and make the page better. Be ruthless! Attack it with a cleaver, and only keep the funny bits! |
| Final Score: | 36.5 | This could be a vehicle for you to be very creative by blending some interesting concepts together should you want to improve this and take it to the next level. |
| Reviewer: | MrN  18:27. Jul 13
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