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User:WarWalrus/What to do when gypsies steal your carrots[edit source]
Don't be confused if you see who originally made this. I've just changed my account.--WarWalrus (talk) 23:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
WarWalrus (talk) 23:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
- I like it. Expect in 24 hours or my name isn't Olipro. I mean Oliphaunte. --OliOmniOmbudsman 22:52, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
- Well as Oliphaunte has failed to post his review within the 24 hour time frame he allotted for himself, I hear-by claim this review for myself. - Fe+3 AlFe+2 01:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Humour: | 8 | I did enjoy the read. Here's my point by point dissection of it.
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Concept: | 10 | Thank you for finally giving me a step by step for this! Believe it or not this has happened to me before... twice.
If you haven't already thought of it, then I'll be the one to say that this should end up under the HowTo namespace. |
Prose and formatting: | 6.78 | I noticed numerous spelling and grammatical issues throughout (including multiple spellings of "gypsy")... I might correct them but I reserve the right to be a dick and just point them out to you and then proceed to bug you to fix them :D |
Images: | 8.5 | The images could be more creative but for the purposes of this article they work just fine. |
Miscellaneous: | 8.3 | I just averaged your scores... Whoopity-do-da! |
Final Score: | 41.58 | This is a fine article you have written here. I look forward to when it hits mainspace. Thanks again ([{again} again] again) for a good read. |
Reviewer: | - Fe+3 AlFe+2 03:20, May 1, 2012 (UTC) |