Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Doovad/Bass
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User:Doovad/Bass[edit source]
Well, after writing Right Arrow I had to write something. Here is my next attempt at an article. I think it feels a little weak, and I would like to bring it in a direction people might actually find funny. SO any tips would be appreciated. Thanks. -- Sir FS Doovad Read You got somethin to say? 03:01, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Could've been funnier. Maybe some more random humor or repitition? |
| Concept: | 7 | Neat concept, but you still have a long ways to go! |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | I'm illiterate in prose, formatting was good though! |
| Images: | 6 | Good images, should get some with captions from the article maybe? |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Very good randomness...and I love elypsises! |
| Final Score: | 34 | |
| Reviewer: | Razorflame | |
First review..hope I did it right!