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User:ArrowFlint22/Ringling Brothers Circus[edit source]
ArrowFlint22 (talk) 18:31, 17 April 2019 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | I found the article as a whole pretty funny. I found the way you described the gradual progression of the Ringling Brothers from a small cocaine dealership into a massive, organized crime ring especially hilarious. The article stuck to its narrative and didn't distract me with pointless in-jokes or out-of-place asides. |
| Concept: | 9 | Parodying the Ringling Brothers Circus, whether it be by parodying recent controversies that caused the circus to shut down, or whether the intention was simply to subvert the "wholesome" perception of the circus by reimagining it as a crime ring, is a brilliant concept that offers a plethora of humorous possibilites. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Fairly conventional encyclopedia-style prose. The article is fairly well-written and I can't find any grammar or spelling mistakes. Mostly, the prose and formatting of the article is OK, although the political analogies such as "manipulating and lying like Hillary" and "selling recreational nukes to the Chinese like Bill Clinton" felt out-of-place, especially considering the article is not primarily about politics. I'd suggest altering those phrases to instead use wikilinks to refer to the political figures; for example, [[Hillary Clinton|manipulating and lying]]. But like I said, the article is otherwise written pretty well. |
| Images: | 6 | The images were moderately humorous, although I'd suggest finding a different picture of an angry clown without an "angry clown" watermark. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | Overall, I found the article average to above-average. It's certainly high-quality enough to be moved to mainspace. |
| Final Score: | 35.5 | I'm pretty new here although I've been lurking for some time. If you want to consult another, more experienced reviewer, feel free to do so. |
| Reviewer: | SwineHerd (talk) 18:54, 10 July 2019 (UTC) | |