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United Nations Charter[edit source]
Yep. --EMC [TALK] 22:58, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
| United Nations Charter is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
| Humour: | 5.3 | avg of each section
Well, I know what you're talking about now. That part about the vatican city was kinda random, though...
It's just a list! You could go in depth on some of those articles, you know, instead of just rattling off random stuff, EMC!
That made little to no sense to me. |
| Concept: | 6 | It's always a good idea to make something boring funny, however this doesn't really know how to do that. I don't know how to do it either, really. I would suggest going up and beyond the level of boredom, and talk about how boring it is. This should be exaggeration and be sprinkled with a few pieces of craziness amongst the rambling. But how would you do this efficiently? I'm not sure. I like that you wrote this, but it needs work and contemplation to make it good. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | It has a list! Right in the middle! |
| Images: | 7 | It only has one picture that is fairly large. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.1 | {{Pee|5.3|6|6|7}}
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| Final Score: | 30.4 | This needs some more effort put into it. Not that I didn't find it funny, it's just that it's a little too random for me as is. |
| Reviewer: | • <-> (Dec 24 / 17:02) | |