Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnTunes:Oh, Cinnamon
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UnTunes:Oh, Cinnamon[edit source]
,':-( sir Ch00_Bakka )-:', 21:44, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
:Oh shit, it's an UnTunes. But I'll brave this review. 12-48 hours--If you're 555 then I'm
23:37, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
- On second thought, I let someone else do this one--If you're 555 then I'm
23:50, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
- On second thought, I let someone else do this one--If you're 555 then I'm
| Humour: | 4 | The only thing I found funny about this was how similar "sinner man" and "cinnamon" sound to each other. Turning the subject to making cinnamon apples for breakfast doesn't really generate that much humour. It would be much, much funnier, if you made a recording of you/someone else singing this, with added sound effects for milk being poured etc. The lyrics just aren't funny enough by themselves, especially as there's so little content due to the repetition. |
| Concept: | 6 | I think the concept has some promise, but not without a recording and quite a bit of work on the article. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Capitalization in the song is irregular. Why is Apple capitalized, but milk not ? Don't see any reason why Where should be either. |
| Images: | 6 | The image is a reasonable pun on "Where you gonna run to?", but it's not related to the rest of the song. You should optimally have images for all the verses, with pictures of, like...milk, and spoons and so forth. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | It's pretty short considering how long the original song is. |
| Final Score: | 28 | As per comment on concept. |
| Reviewer: | Coronium 22:40, January 2, 2011 (UTC) | |