Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Sheep saves David Cameron from drowning by wading into muddy swamp

IFYMB! Talk to me baby! 23:54 4 July 2013 23:54, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

Never reviewed an UnNews before. Oh well, there's always a first time. Here goes.

Humour:	7	Good. Not the best you can come up with, but good enough. Personally I prefer an article that is equally funny all over, rather than one that's funnier in parts. This article is of the former category. It is evenly funny. If you consider changes upon this article, try not to disturb this smoothness. Suggestions: Since this article is overly British, include local dialects in the quotes if you want. Also, saving the Prime Minister has its rewards. Won't the Government announce a reward for Sheepy? Yes! Add the reward as the concluding line in the article. The perfect ending.
Concept:	7.5	Pffch. The classic subject swap. Never fails.
Prose and formatting:	8.5	Neat. The article looks pretty. Some loose grammar though. I'll correct those in a bit, right after this review.
Images:	6	Okay. Nice images, wish they were better in context. In fact, the picture of the farm can be removed without making the article lose its appeal. Suggested image, well, of Sheepy the sheep. You can find a muddy sheep anywhere on the Internet.
Miscellaneous:	7.3	Avg'd score.
Final Score:	36.3	Pretty good. Funny concept, mildly humourous content, neat formatting. Overall a decent article, if not the funniest. Also, I'm kind of surprised by how little I have to say. I usually have at least 3-4 suggestions for both the article and images. Guess I'll have to adapt to UnNews a bit.
Reviewer:	Tumb 13 weed 21:33, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

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