Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Man drowns on Dick Cheney fishing trip

New page, just wrote it today. I love it. But then again I'm an egotist --The Hunt A dash of Dickensian 05:07, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	8	Funny. I liked the part where he swallows his pride and accepts the apology. Typical asshole behaviour, and totally in character.
Concept:	9	Nearly brilliant. Hunting accident, fishing accident, what will they think of next ?
Prose and formatting:	9	Very good too. If I didn't know better, I'd say you sporked an article about the original accident. Quotes are just right, all in all, a well-balanced newsstory.
Images:	8	The action jumps right out at you. Still, you might have gotten someone to alter it so that (a glimpse of) the drowned body was visible. Ah, well, this is good too.
Miscellaneous:	10	I took the liberty of spell-checking your article using the spell-checker built into the Wikipaedia editor. This in turn Americanized some spellings. If this upsets you, please revert it back to your version and accept my humblest apologies.
Final Score:	44	potential VFH material
Reviewer:	di Mario 15:55, 14 July 2007 (UTC)

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