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UnNews:In response to widespread devastation in California, Bush declares war on fire[edit source]
'Tis a bit of a rehash of the same theme I first did in War on Spinach. I don't think this one turned out quite as good as I hoped, but I'm not a great judge. Opinions, pleeze! --THE 16:36, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Humour was very consistant through all of the article. The only section that did NOT make me laugh was the last one. |
| Concept: | 10 | Very original concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | I could not find any spelling or grammar mistakes. That is good. |
| Images: | 10 | Images help make the humor better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9.5 | avg'd |
| Final Score: | 47.5 | Keep working at this and you will have a GREAT article! |
| Reviewer: | -Razorflame
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Talk 20:11, 8 November 2007 (UTC) | |