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UnNews:Girl, 10, who recieved hippopotamus for Christmas, stomped to death[edit source]
The article is for people who know the song, or at least have the sense of mind to listen to it. Plzkthx. --KnaveOfWonderland 00:22, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
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This raptor is guarding this article while his master, Iwillkillyou333 is reviewing it. Be Careful! He Bites. |
| Humour: | 10 | I honeslty think that this is one heck of a awesome article. However theres a few things I think you shoul add. For example, since the image shows her being sat on by a Hippopotamus, instead of saying she was stomped on by it, maybe say it sat on her, thinking she was a chair. And maybe she sang that song so much Santa finally gave her one. And what happen to the hippopatumus himself? Was he returned to Africa or became hippo burgers? And for people who dont know the song, its best to put a link below sources However Thats up to you. |
| Concept: | 10 | A nice parody of the famous song "I want a Hippopotamus for Christmas" makes this concept FTW |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | No mistakes :) |
| Images: | 10 | One, and it supports you article well, maybe one more would work, but thats up too you. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Very Awesome |
| Final Score: | 50 | Its always best to get someone elses opinion, but i believ this is a great article. You should get it featured |
| Reviewer: | -- WILL YOU 333 23:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
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