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UnBooks:Max Payne's Max Payne Writing The Book "Max Payne" by Max Payne[edit source]
My first UnBook. I like it, but I'd like to know what other people think of it. My last Pee Review Request got ignored, but i have better hopes for this one. --MaxPayne 19:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
MaxPayne 19:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
Humour: | 8 | Offbeat and zany. I like that |
Concept: | 7 | I thought it would be boring. It wasn't. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | Appropriate, no, perfect prose |
Images: | 5 | Needs work. Less with the guns. Typewriters. Full ashtrays. |
Miscellaneous: | 7 | Good stuff with the working in of the "spoilers" |
Final Score: | 34 | Please do more like this. For me. |
Reviewer: | Pieface |