Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Master Baiter's Sportfishing and Tackle's Official Policy Regarding Workplace Harassment and Discriminatory Practices by the Employee Base for New Employees
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UnBooks:Master Baiter's Sportfishing and Tackle's Official Policy Regarding Workplace Harassment and Discriminatory Practices by the Employee Base for New Employees[edit source]
Yep. Let me know what you think. --EMC [TALK] 00:12 Oct 20 2009
- I'll review this. But I will be completely pissed if you don't sexually harrass me! King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court) 00:17, October 21, 2009 (UTC)
Humour: | 7.5 | Who is this noob? I like to start my reviews by talking about myself just because I like talking about myself. Seriously, I think it helps the reviewee to get an idea where the reviewer is coming from. I worked in a place where men and women freely used profanity with each other, made jokes with each other about genitalia and having sex with each other and even helping each other on the toilet. I've also worked in a place where the men were advised to not make any comment whatsoever about a woman's appearance--"If you say you like her dress, she might think you're referring to the shape of her bosom and you could get sued for sexual harassment."
I typically put Prose and Formatting in with Humour because otherwise I end up repeating myself unnecessarily, but do score them separately. Title
Sexual harassment
Verbal abuse
Racial discrimination
Tire slashing
What to do
Example box thingy
Conclusion
I think I'd like the order changed in the top sectons to Racial discrimination, Verbal abuse and then Sexual harassment. Citations
I would have rated Humor as 8, maybe higher, without the tire slashing part (or if it was rewritten to fit the tone of the rest of the brochure). |
Concept: | 8 | This would be an 8.5 or maybe even a 9 if you incorporated this being a tackle shop more. If your concept is for such a shop, I'd incorporate more references. |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | Same score comment as on Concept. I believe Formatting is something that generally shouldn't be noticed as obvious formatting usually distracts from the article. I think formatting's fan. |
Images: | 7.5 | I'm grading these separately. The guy and the girl is a 9 just because it looks kind-of-sort-of naughty yet innocent even though he's touching her breast. Her right breast. Her young, perky, firm...OK I'll shut up about that. The tire slashing photo I think is OK (a 6), but I couldn't tell that's a circular saw in it. |
Miscellaneous: | 7.75 | Average of above. I think this is a very good article minus the tire slashing part (unless it's rewritten) and with "Jen the stocker" rewritten so it fits the tone of what comes before (or at least has a nice transition). |
Final Score: | 38.75 | Please let me know on my talk page if you edit this. Notice my score before any future edits is just below a feature level score? Hint hint? |
Reviewer: | King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court) 01:39, October 21, 2009 (UTC) |