Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Trinidad and Tobago

Rotating-Fortress 21:02, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	5	This was a tough article to review. I absolutely loved the first half of the article, but when you started wring about the leaf game and other such irrelevant nonsense, my enthusiasm curdled. It was a shame to see such a good article falter like that.
Concept:	7.5	Again, conflicting. I would have given you a perfect ten if you had stuck with the whole "Where is Tobago?" concept, but really. What the heck is up with the leaf game and yellow car game stuff? That should be its own separate article.
Prose and formatting:	4	Your big failing (other than the national sport nonsense). The article is riddled with spelling errors. You seem to not be able to make up your mind how Tobago is spelled, and "Inovation" has two n's. I bring "Inovation" up mainly b/c it was in a heading. Your formatting was mediocre; I noticed a few ugly-lookin' blank areas. Oh, and you don't need that German template. Not funny, and it breaks up the flow.
Images:	7	The images were decent. They didn't disturb the article's flow too much, and they helped out the article a bit, but they were not funny.
Miscellaneous:	5.9	Avg'd.
Final Score:	29.4	All I can say is to get rid of the "game" sections and just continue with the first half of the article. If your stuck for ideas, ask around. This is a great idea that should not be squandered.
Reviewer:	• • • Necropaxx (T) {~} 00:43, Jun 3

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