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The Final Countdown

Cheers. I hope you like it! Nameable 20:10, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

The Final Countdown is being reviewed by CajekHi! Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him

Hmmm, okay?   Le Cejak • <3:53 Jun 05, 2009>

Humour:	3.3	avg, 7=Now, Nameable, please don't be discouraged by the score. It's reflected by the fact that I thought you were going to talk about the song or something! average article, yadda yadda: Introduction (4/10): I'm pretty lost. I don't know what to say, Nameable. What are we counting down, again? I know the song: "It's the FINAL COUNTDOOOOWN" by Europe. I listen to it all the time, obviously. But this... I have no idea. Therefore, because it doesn't explain itself, I have to mark it way down. The reason it's not lower is because you've got the funny spirit in there, just by virtue of how you write. Anyway (4/10): I, uh, don't understand, man. Are you making fun of the song? The Final Countdown (2/10): ...what?
Concept:	3	Now, I know that's a low score. However, although you do scripts very well, and this does feel like a script, it doesn't make sense. It just... doesn't make sense!
Prose and formatting:	6	This is inbetween an unscript and an article, so it felt weird to me. Random paragraph breaks, a speaker who is speaking directly to me... it's just weird. Did you... did you ever make fun of the song?
Images:	7	You had some okay pictures and okay quotes in there. But, meh.
Miscellaneous:	4.8	{{Pee}}
Final Score:	24.1	I was really just baffled by this. I don't know what to say. If you have any idea what direction you want to take this in.
Reviewer:	Le Cejak • <4:39 Jun 05, 2009>