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Who's the dude that moves to the beat? Well, it sure as hell wasn't the article before. But I made a rewrite that hopefully isn't complete badger-sputumly (wish I knew what that meant. But Douglas Adams is dead now, and nothing short of the Dragonballs will change that. (But the Dragonballs don't exist, and nothing short of mad science will change that.)) Anyway, REVIEW IT MOTHERFUCKER. Please. Ж Kalir _{potentially sexier than you} 01:39, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	8	"...take on a greenish hue when ill or stuffed in the dryer." OMGWTFROTFLMAO!!!!!!!1!!1 That's pretty good. And nice work on making references to Ling Ling and Pikachu, but not overusing them.
Concept:	7.5	A much better written article than the last one, IMO.
Prose and formatting:	7	Well layed out, but could still afford to be expanded upon.
Images:	6	I guess the one image on the page works where it is, but the rest of the page is a little bland.
Miscellaneous:	7	Some parts of this sound strangely like Strong Bad's writings. Given the context of the page, that's probably a good thing, as long as we're not stepping on anyone's copyright licenses or anything.
Final Score:	35.5	A well-written amusing article. I really liked it, and found myself chuckling throughout. I'm not sure if it's front page quality yet, but it's well on it's way thanks to an excellent rewrite.
Reviewer:	Spillin DylanTALKEDITS20:36, Nov 18