Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Sofia Coppola

This is crap. Help me make it good. --Black Flamingo 13:28, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Humour:	5	The article works off of the adage that, "it's funny because it's true," but here, there is too much truth and not enough exaggeration or silliness to move things into the realm of humor. There is nothing inherently funny about a scion of Hollywood achieving success or attention by riding on the coattails of more successful or talented relatives, so something more is needed. For example, maybe when talking about Sofia's minimalist tendencies, you could say she worked as a street mime on Sunset Boulevard? I don't know.
Concept:	8	The concept is funny. Taken to the extreme, there is a lot of comedy to mine from the idea that Sofia got where she is (and where she isn't) based on her connections and family. The execution just needs work.
Prose and formatting:	9	The article is well-written and in the style of an encyclopedia. No really critique here.
Images:	6	The images are okay but something more zany is needed to take the article over the top. Are there any photos on the net of Sofia in ridiculous positions, or looking really frumpy? Can something be photo-shopped?
Miscellaneous:	7	I used the average Pee score rating system here.
Final Score:	35	I think I've said it already. The concept is funny and there is a lot of truth to work with, but there needs to be more exaggeration, like there is at the very beginning with the ridiculous list of connections/relatives Sofia has.
Reviewer:	--NoNamesLeft 19:50, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

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