Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Samsung Galaxy Fold
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Samsung Galaxy Fold[edit source]
Jetpakturtle (talk) 01:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | I like the type of humor you've chosen: dry and sarcastic. It works well with the subject. I just think there's a little too much truth in the article, and some of the jokes are too close to actual complaints. It could do with a little more deviation into silliness as the articles progresses. I like the subtle, but very sarcastic tone. The fourth wall break with the Samsung letters was nice. |
| Concept: | 7 | Concept is simple, which I think is generally good. You've stuck to writing about things actually directly related to the Samsung Fold, rather than instantly going to some absurd Non Sequitur. As stated above, this concept has the potential for a lot of good dry humor, but it's just not all there yet. Looks and reads like an actual article with technical specs. Strong intro paragraph. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I enjoy how the article is written through a bunch of technical specs. |
| Images: | 5 | With all the talk of things that are physically wrong with the Fold, I think it would be a great opportunity to add images of absurd issues the phone has. The one image was just a normal Fold phone, which is okay, but the caption wasn't very funny. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | This sentence: "However, it was criticized, due to problems with the display breaking in many ways." Seems to fall a little flat. I think a joke should go there instead of a bland statement of the phone breaking sometimes. |
| Final Score: | 34 | Good article, It's clever and just needs a little more content. I would focus on making the issues the phone has slowly become more and more surreal as the article progresses, with occasional images to add spice. |
| Reviewer: | Odysseus (talk) | |