Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Rwanda
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Rwanda[edit source]
Matfen 15:51, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | I don't like part that "Rwanda is a home to 6 Billion people... Not only beacause i find word "milliard" more suitbale for "billion" but also beacuase it's ... meh kinda lame that in every article about country it's something about billions of people living in the country. Part about genocide and poverty line in the iintor is nicely done. The history sections is seriously amusing, nothing to change there. In the genocide sections: It's quite OK but is it necessary to use the Facebook and Twitter in it? ;p. No reservations to Post-Civil War. Rebuilding part - best so far - especially that sentence about Dubya sending 200$ lego set - that just ruined me. Transport and Communication consist of typical stereothypes about the infrastructure in any African country but it's nicely implemented. Article was entertaining but you forgot to mention their former flag that contains big letter R on it! How could you miss that! There is no better flag in the world to laugh at! |
| Concept: | 10 | Concept is really, really nice. Infobox has been made originally compared to others that conaint mostly shitty jokes and some more crap. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well, prose is typically wikipedian. No anger, no agitation there. Well, Wikipedian style is recommended in that article but some outbursts of hatred would be cool. And some nice ending should be implemented. It ends so suddenly without an ass-kicking joke. |
| Images: | 9 | I like pictures and captions. But you should think about adding R-flag. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Ok, but I don't like jebany Twitter and kurweski Facebook |
| Final Score: | 42 | 42 |
| Reviewer: |  Sir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj • KUN 13:11, December 24, 2009 (UTC) (And again 42; damn...)
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