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Ron Burgandy[edit source]
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PRIP EXPIRED Though Javascap reserved this Pee Review, he/she/it/Abominable Snowman has not yet completed it. You may claim the review by replacing his/her/its/Abominable Snowman's name with yours. |
Parsnipzilla 05:37, 5 March 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Biographies tend to be a bit hard to make humourous, just bear that in mind. I did not find anything too particularly funny, but the article was not stupid, so, I gave it a 5. |
| Concept: | 6 | A good shot at writing a biography about a person I have never heard of, so overall, I gave you a nicely rounded up score. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Nice work with sentence construction and grammer, but a few errors were found. Try copying this article into MS Word or whatever word formatting program you use, and running a spell check to catch the daft bits. |
| Images: | 5 | A decent picture, but nothing humourous underneath the picture. Add something to make people laugh. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Rounded as per Pee Review Guidlines |
| Final Score: | 30 | I might have understood the humour a bit better if I knew more about Mr. Burgandy, but here are my recommendations in a can. A) Run a speel chack. B) Punch something funny in underneath the picture, using to insert the punch line. C) Step away from the gay joke and think of something that others havn’t done before. If you have any questions, please feel free to leave a message on my Talk Page |
| Reviewer: | Warm regards, Javascap 19:49, 5 March 2008 (UTC) | |
Quick spelling nazi comment: Burgundy is spelled with a "u", not an "a". Just thought I'd point that out. Cannonball! --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 22:12, Mar 5