Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Robitussin (rewrite)
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Robitussin [edit source]
Guildensternenstein 06:06, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
I rewrote this a while back, but I don't know if anyone/everyone knew, hence this.
--Guildensternenstein 06:06, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | You've taken something unfunny and tried to make it funny but its really nor worked out, I know it says be funny not just stupid, but you can be a little stupid, a little bit immaturity might help this article. |
| Concept: | 4 | This has already been done, multiple times, see calpol |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | The language part of this is ok but all you have in respect is added some falsities to the article. |
| Images: | 4 | Your images are only relying on captions, given the content of the article, you could do with some photoshop, even paint. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | The idea is good, but it has been done before, its not greatly funny, it does however have potential, I hope you review this again after improvements. |
| Final Score: | 22 | Keep up the good work, a tip for being funny, write what would make you laugh. |
| Reviewer: | --Projectmayhem666 Talk 22:45, 24 February 2009 (UTC) | |