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Regifting[edit source]
I'd really like to get this one into the net for x-mas. Got slightly poo-pooed on VFH last year but clearly has a solid foundation to build upon. 11:35, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6+1 | I love the general feel of the article. Very funny, and your terse serious tone only amplified the hilarity. I thought you could make it a tad funnier by augmenting the Altruism section to have it read "The fruitcake can be tossed, in chunks, out in the yard for squirrels and birds. Or, preferably, at squirrels and birds." I also think you could add a smidgen more of humor in the intro; remember, it's the introduction that hooks people. For example, add in some funny examples of social cues and etiquette (some serious, to continue your overarching theme, and possibly just some out-there themes that have nothing to do with the theme at all). |
| Concept: | 4*2 | I love the concept; I'm glad someone finally took the time to do it! |
| Prose and formatting: | 8+1 | Your almost serious nature in the article, like I've said before, only exemplifies the humo(u)r in the article. |
| Images: | 18/2 | Your photos are hilarious. Or, rather, their captions! Terse, to the point, humor. I think these are good examples of when vulgarity enhances hilarity instead of diminishes it. I also think there is just enough photos for the article, too. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | The overall feel of the article is nice, and it has a pseudo-encyclopedic flair to it. Although, it almost seems like a HowTo: article, but could easily pass for its present state. |
| Final Score: | 21 | Well written, although a bit of humor in strategic places would enhance it even further. All in all, a funny article. |
| Reviewer: | --βia§ EATS <insert name here>es all the time :) 22:37, November 8, 2010 (UTC) | |