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Primus[edit source]
Me and Roman Dog Bird did this quite a long time, and now it's (quite) ready. I believe this is very funny, but someone not so-much-Primus-knowing-person may not. I'd like to hear the opinions of anti-me-persons. Is this feature-worthy, if not what would make it better etc etc.
Zzz 
10:43, 26 June, 2012 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | This article spends a lot of time on the band members themselves and on who entered and left the band, but not nearly enough time on the songs composed by the band. This article seems long, and after awhile, those who aren't familiar with the real-life band start to become confused or bored with all the changes to the band, and not in a funny way. I like the part about it being the band who slung the mud around the stage during "My Name is Mud", having scanned the wikipedia article on the band, and recalling hearing about that incident on the news or reading it in a newspaper. |
| Concept: | 7 | Band articles are rather common, so I can hardly give points for originality here. Also, it is hard to find a main idea behind the entire article, the article mainly seems to be about either albums produced by the band or changes in band members. If the idea was that the band sucks, this was not evident in all the albums, or in all the band member changes. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | No formatting mistakes, no problems with spelling or grammar that I could find. The writing style is good. |
| Images: | 9 | Several good images, good captions. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I averaged your scores, this is a slightly above average article. |
| Final Score: | 40 | Sorry it took so long for me to get this reviewed, guess I was hoping for someone who knew more about the band to come along. This article would probably be funnier to someone familiar with the band. |
| Reviewer: | -- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 03:29, December 5, 2012 (UTC) | |