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Potato Sack Races[edit source]
A little something I wrote with Staircase a LONG while back. Just checking to see what people think! Thanks in advance! Please in-depth. Tagstit talk contribs awards 18:09, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | While not outstanding in humor, I did laugh several times while reading this article. I can imagine that this particular topic didn't jump out as a nesting ground for chuckles and laughs, and from what I can tell, you really did your best to work any jokes that could be made from it. |
| Concept: | 8 | As I said above, the jokes probably didn't just write themselves when you were making this article. I'm giving you an eight for both taking on this challenge and for making a pretty decent piece of work out of it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Very professional writing. It looked a lot like a genuine encyclopedia article. There were a couple of spots where improvement could be made, but well done overall. |
| Images: | 9.5 | The images were where this article really shines. They were well-picked and positioned in the right places, and really supported the text. No further work is needed here. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Although I like your style of writing and the fact that you made jokes relevant to the topic, I felt that you wer a bit too serious in some spots. Remember, this isn't Conservapedia we're dealing with. |
| Final Score: | 38.5 | A quality article overall. Could use some improvement, but I liked it. |
| Reviewer: | There's no I in rape 04:15, 18 August 2009 (UTC) | |