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Nuclear semiotics

It's incomplete.--ICameHereInACloche 03:13, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I see that. But I shall do it.---   TALK What's it like to be a heretic? 23:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still working on this, though my computer isnt cooperating with me to well.--~~

Humour:	7	The beginning of the article was pretty good. Very original. The rest of the article was good with the exception of the section about flowers. The parts that said "now this is just getting ridiculous" and the last sentence of the article kinda ruined the flow, so I advise you get rid of those. There's not much more for me to say ad the article is currently incomplete as you said. Maybe you can can involve stuff like nuclear lakes, nuclear rocks, nuclear wives, or something like that.
Concept:	7	Okay, for an incomplete article this one isn't so bad. I like where your going here. Even though I have no knowledge of what nuclear semiotics (and therefore looked it up on Wikipedia), I do like what I see. There are a couple of things that should be adjusted, but concept wise it's pretty good.
Prose and formatting:	5	I think I saw one or two mistakes. I'm not so good at that kind of thing unless it's obviously bad. It's just minimum mistakes, so a little proofreading would help. I did see a red link, so get rid of that as it leads to nowhere. The formatting isnt really that good. It could be me, but I think you should stick with the usual format. Course that's my opinion, so you can do whatever you want with it.
Images:	7	Images are pretty good if I saw so myself. They pretty much support your article. Though that taco one was a bit iffy, but adding a caption could fix that. Other than that, try to expand the sizes of the images some and you should be good on Images.
Miscellaneous:	6.5	My average score score of the article.
Final Score:	32.5	Sorry this to so long. Would've got it done sooner had my computer hadn't decided to be a pain in the butt. Feel free to ask me any questions on my talkpage. Cheers.
Reviewer:	---   TALK What's it like to be a heretic? 22:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)