Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Mink Game (2nd Opinion)
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Mink Game[edit source]
Just be brutally honest.--Gaberou 22:43, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Eh, kinda funny, but leaves a lot to be desired in spots. |
| Concept: | 9 | Ugh, I HATE suburbia sometimes. Good job. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Submit to Ceridwyn's Proofreading Service to fix this up. |
| Images: | 6 | Not a big fan of the animated GIFs. Get rid of the Pulp Fiction one definitely (shoddily made and irritating), but the other one can stay. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | A little polishing could do this bad boy wonders. I would say that instead of trying to cover so many bases, concentrate on one or two sections at a time and really make them funny. |
| Final Score: | 33 | Good luck! |
| Reviewer: | Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 13:50, 3 June 2007 (UTC) | |