Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Milkshake

I want to see how good this article looks and sounds. Thank you. -- MagicBus Hello? Is there anybody there? 20:57, 2 June 2013 (UTC)

Humour:	6.9	Decent. I'm glad you didn't go out of your way to make it a slapstick tickler. The tone is consistent throughout the article. However, you can add a section like Precautions. I'm guessing it'll be fun. And, if you are willing to break the simple monotone that the article carries, add a section dedicated to Alternative ingredients of milkshake.
Concept:	7.7	Me gusta. The best part of the articles is ~~that girl drinking a milkshake~~ that it's simple, yet humorous. Someone might transform the article into something involving lots of unexpected surprises and it wouldn't be half as pleasant to read.
Prose and formatting:	8	Neat. The article looks pretty and everything.
Images:	5.5	Blah. Add more picz!!1!eleven Relevant ones though. Include one for the spilt milkshake section if you wish.
Miscellaneous:	6.9	To fix: Make the last two sections a bit longer if possible. Images. Can you add a couple more bullets to some ways of enjoying milkshake?
Final Score:	35	Somewhat funny. It doesn't quite make me guffaw out loud, but does manage a laugh. A little makeup and it'll be a 40-pointer. Have fun.
Reviewer:	Tumb13weed (talk) 20:14, 4 June 2013 (UTC) If you found this review inspiring, drop me this purdy thing.

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