Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Metal Sonic (Resubmit)

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Metal Sonic[edit source]

After a couple of weeks trying to get the writing done (sort of), and finally adding some pictures, I think it's time for this article to get reviewed again. it got a sort of high rating the last time, so let's hope it gets a good one this time round.

As before, this article is taking Metal Sonic and mixing it with terminator. Therefore the whole thing is loosely based on the movies. Near enough. – Preceding unsigned comment added by Garionepsilon (talk • contribs) Yeah, so any reviewing would be nice.--Garionepsilon 16:37, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 7 The article starts off quite well with the whole Eggman-getting-eaten thing. The fates of the first three assassins are also pretty dang funny (especially the fact that Sonic merely throws a brick at each one). However, your story needs to be less melodramatic.
Concept: 10 Metal Sonic is definitely a character in need of mocking.
Prose and formatting: 6 There are several typos and grammatical errors scattered throughout that need to be fixed. Submit it to Proofreading.
Images: 6 I like the images you have, but you need a few more.
Miscellaneous: 7.3 Metal Amy. Perfect ending.
Final Score: 36.3 I've submitted an article to the Pee Review called Atlanta. I'd appreciate it if you would review it, please.
Reviewer: --Anakin 15:45, 18 January 2008 (UTC)