Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Lil Tecca
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Lil Tecca[edit source]
Levi Strauss (talk) 18:07, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.2 | a little all over the place with the humor styles, but tbh most articles on here are. The controversies section by far has the best humor, the rest is a little random and feels like a few articles (or potential articles) mixed together. |
| Concept: | 8 | no issue with the concept, perfectly reasonable. Having him as a proto-deity instead of classic rapper is an interesting take for sure, and I like the way it's going. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6.2 | No issues spotted with the text itself, seems ok. Sometimes it FEELS like sentences are a bit odd, but grammar wise and spelling wise they DO check out. Just might need some better wording to get it to flow better? As for the formatting, more detail on the image section... |
| Images: | 5.5 | well, there's images. The first one is pretty funny, but the rest feel like stock photos and the one of the guy's face is weirdly gigantic which doesn't help the formatting at all. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.5 | piss aggregate score, blame math |
| Final Score: | 32.4 | Some formatting should be changed (ie the image sizes), and some sentences need reworked so it all flows together better. A good practice is to try and read it out loud and if you can get into "the flow" while reading then it's good. This one is a little disjointed, but the concept is 100% there. |
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